The first book was good. The changes they made between the
book and the film seemed like logical ones, especially considering the first
person narrative of the book. Overall I’d say the changes made in the film were
for the better, giving a much larger view of the impacts of Katniss’ actions in
the games and things happening around her than is possible to show in the book.
The book is however much more detailed and brutal than the film is but I have
to say I probably enjoyed the first book on roughly the same level as the film.
The only major problem I have with the first book (which
also carries into the next one, and to a lesser extent the third one), is the
structure of the books themselves. Each book is broken into three parts, with
each part then containing nine chapters. That would be a perfectly fine thing
to do except for the fact that the author insists on rigidly dividing where the
breaks are. All the chapters are roughly the same length, and each part takes
up almost exactly a third of the book. The problem I had with this was that
there seemed to be many logical places where a chapter break should occur but
these don’t fit into her system and are simply ignored. Strange time jumps take
place (especially in the second book) in the middle of chapters that would make
sense to take place between chapters, and a lot of chapters simply end without
any defining end point. This may just be the writer in me but it felt very
forced.
One major example of this problem I can think of occurs in
the first book. The first part of the book deals with the build up to the games
and Katniss’ selection and the process she then goes through. But then rather
than the second part starting as she goes into the games, a logical transition
and resting place, the first chapter of the second part continues dealing with
the build-up and then the second chapter
starts the games. It felt like an odd choice as I was reading, but then as I
realised how the structure worked, it just seemed like the author was trying to
stick to rigidly to it at the expense of clean story-telling.
As for the second two books, things begin to slowly go
downhill from the mostly strong first book. The second book begins strongly as
we learn more of the impending rebellion of the districts but it begins to fall
apart in the second half. In this book, Katniss seems much less sure of herself
than in the first and begins to become very whiney towards the end. It does
however end quite well, making me intrigued for the final book (and I mean the
very end of the book, as in the last page, maybe, up until that it wasn’t
really that strong).
Then came the third book which for me was a major
disappointment. Rather than the strong Katniss we knew in the first book and
who began to make a return towards the end of the second, we now have a Katniss
who spends about 50% of her time being drugged into sleep. The book is a
constant series of things happening, Katniss simply reacting a bit, and then
she has to be knocked out for her own safety. Katniss doesn’t drive anything in
the story for much of the book, which would be fine, but this book is told as a
first person narrative and this lack of motivation grows wearying as you read.
In the final third of the book (yes, the author didn’t give up on her rigid
structure) Katniss finally starts driving things along only for the climax to
be whipped away from us and an unnecessarily random death thrown in to give a ‘big
moment’ which ultimately under-delivered.
A lot of the book feels random, in fact, and I think this is
my biggest gripe with it. We don’t get much of a sense of the scale of the war,
just random notifications throughout of how much the rebels have taken over.
And during all this rebellion and war, where is the rest of the world? With the
threat of potential nuclear war in North America, wouldn’t other countries
perhaps have a passing interest? Or are we to believe that the US is the only
country to survive into the future?
It felt at times like the author was trying to inject some of
the feeling of George Orwell’s 1984 in to this final book, but it ends up
feeling like a pale comparison of Orwell’s classic. The central concept of who
can be trusted throughout the book is an interesting theme in concept, but unfortunately
is very predictably dealt with here.
I think that the trilogy would have been better served being
just two books. There is a lot of filler in the second and third parts, and to
be honest I don’t think the main ‘event’ of the second book was really
necessary. The start of the second book could quite easily have led into most
of the third.
I can’t say I’d recommend the books to anyone, although at
the same time I wouldn’t try to dissuade them either. The first book IS good,
but it’s just a pity the next two didn’t live up to its promise.
All in all, I won’t be waiting with baited breath to see the
film adaptations.
Rating: 2 stars out of 5
This review is absolutely spot on James! These are exactly the same gripes I had, much you've summed it up really concisely here...and also, I wasn't smart enough to figure her 9 chapter structure, but now that you say it it definitely explains a lot.
ReplyDeleteI hated how Katniss became a shadow of herself as the books progressed...and the other characters were even worse. They were just spouting lines without any motivation or character consistency!
Great review, I agree completely, I got the impression that Suzanne Collins lost control of the trilogy near the end of book one, either publishers took over and made so many changes it washed out the final product, or in an effort to make three books where two would have sufficed the story lost its way, and characters never developed from book one...
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